2) From my last pitch I received a lot of positive feedback. All three people who commented on my post thought my idea was viable and fun. The most important and I really think only feedback I got was to clarify my introduction a bit more. The body of my pitch was good, as peers suggested, and gave a lot of information. People said I seemed 'knowledgeable' about my app idea, Sports 4 U.
3) I adjusted my introduction to be more informative and give the viewer a more clear idea of what my entrepreneurial idea entails. I was happy to receive the positive feedback and hope to continue to develop this idea!
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