2) From my previous pitch I received a lot of positive feedback. The most important and I really think only feedback I got was to clarify my introduction a bit more. The body of my pitch was good, as peers suggested, and gave a lot of information. People said I seemed 'knowledgeable' about my app idea, Sports 4 U. I just needed to add more info at the beginning to clarify.
3) I adjusted my introduction to be more informative and provide the viewer with a clearer view of my entrepreneurial venture for the University of Florida. It was great to receive feedback that was constructive and somewhat critical. Criticism helps you improve!
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